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Schatten aus vergangenen Tagen:
Meine Lehrerin will es leider in Simple Present haben :( Ich fände past tense auch besser.
Danke für das finden der Fehler, BAAEEM. Bis jetzt steckt die Geschichte noch im Rohbau, da können ein paar Fehler schon vorkommen ;)

Nightmaster:
@Ugluk:falls noch gebraucht ....^^



Die rote Linie ist immer die Resultierende, verschobene Kräfte haben die selbe Farbe...

Ugluk:
omg, ich glaube ich bin dumm, oder ich kann es nicht richtig anwenden :(
erstmal danke, cih glaube den Teil lasse ich in der Arbeit weg

Schatten aus vergangenen Tagen:
Für eine Englischhausaufgabe:
Was heißt anlaufen (im Sinne von zB: alles läuft rot an) auf Englisch?



Hier ist der Rest der Hausaufgabe:

--- Zitat von: >ICH< ---Dead at Primo Victoria

“Get ready guys! It’s time!” shouted Lieutenant Davidson “D-Day upon us!” O’Brian, a young soldier of the United States checked his backpack and controlled his equipment. An unloaded pistol or a broken rifle could cost a man’s life on the front-line. Then O’Brian put on his uniform and went out of his cabin on the military heavy transport cruiser MS-Maryland. On the floor he met his comrade Steven. They knew each other from their hometown. It was a little town in the State of Washington. Everything was fine there, until the war began. Now both of them are in one of the companies allocated for “Operation Neptune”.  “Today, we’ll revenge all the blameless people who were killed by the Germans”, said O’Brian to Steven, “We’ll revenge them.”
After a time, O’Brian and Steven stood, end to end with their battalion, on the deck of the MS Maryland. The Colonel made a speech to them: “Too long threatened the Germans us! Now, we’ll strike back! We’ll fight for all the fallen soldiers, citizens and children!” After the speech, the Battalion marched to the amphibious boats, which were specially invented for a good and unnoticed landing on the shores of the north of the Normandy. Bit by bit unpinned the boats from the heavy cruiser. Quietly the boats swam to the coast. “No enemy’s contact until now“, whispered the Lieutenant’s voice through the walky-talky. There was no noise. Only silence. O’Brian was nervous. It was O’Brian’s and Steven’s first special operation. The rest of the team seemed to be calm. They were veterans. It’s not their first mission. They were experienced elite soldiers. But I, thought O’Brian, “I’m only a cannon fodder for the enemy.”
Then a very loud siren began to howl. “They’ve noticed us”, screamed a team comrade of one of the other boats. The enemy was alarmed. Now the US-Team had to fight offensive. That wasn’t planned. The Radar of the boat was activated by the command-center and a radio message was hearable: “The base of the Germans is only guarded by a several troopers and two planes. This will be easy going.” Only few meters and they would have reached the beach. They got ready. O’Brian’s heart knocked and he looked at Steven in silence. He thought at all what they expired together. Why has the damned war started? WHY? It will take a long time, until I see my wife and my son again. Suddenly there was a whistling. It became louder and louder. It was unbearably. One of the team members screamed and pointed his finger at something upwards. O’Brian tried to find the thing, which has scared his comrade so much. He was shocked. He saw the thing. And it flew towards them. After that, he wasn’t able to do anything else. He was paralyzed. He heard a deafening bang and everything went red.
--- Ende Zitat ---


Edit: Die Frage oben hat sich erledigt. Ich würde mich allerdings freuen, wenn sich einer von euch die Zeit nähme, meinen Text mal durchzulesen und auf Fehlersuche zu gehen :)

Simbyte:
Ich würde da "went red" nehmen, das klingt für diese Situation passend.

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