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Hüter:
Hier noch mal der überarbeitete Text:

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"Troops from our fiefdoms have reached the battlefield!"
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"Veterans of Khazad-Dûm have reached the battlefield"
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"The quest of the dwarves has failed"
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"All heroes have to survive!"
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"Explore and secure the surroundings!"
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"Build at least one mine and one barrack!"
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"Build a tower in front of the cave entrances!"
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"Open the cave entrance in the west!"
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"Find the nests of the monsters and kill the dragons in the cave!"
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"Kill the old dragon!"
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"Destroy the orc's camp and kill their chief!"
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SCRIPT:07Intro_text_01
"Brothers, we have reached the Ered Mithrin!  Long time ago, here settled some dwarves. \n Let us explore and secure this place in order to build up a base here."
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SCRIPT:07Intro_text_02
"Our builder will reach us soon. Until then, we have to get this place secure, so hurry up!"
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"Ah, look, a cave! The entrance is overwhelmed, our workers will have to open it!"
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"The entrance to the cave is overwhelmed, more work for our workers!"
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"Finaly! Our builder and a worker arrived! \n Build at least one mine and one barrack! \n A fortress would not be wrong, too!"
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"Let us protect the cave's entrance with a tower!"
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"Open the cave entrance in the west!"
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"Let us explore the cave in the west and then advance to the north!"
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SCRIPT:07Intro_text_09
"The enemy has spotted us! \n Quick, kill them, before they can warn the others!"
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SCRIPT:07Intro_text_10
"It is too late, we have been spotted!"
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"Look! What a gigantic dragon!"
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SCRIPT:07Intro_text_12
"An evil spell keeps the entrance closed. We cannot go on!"
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SCRIPT:07Intro_text_13
"With the death of the gigantic dragon, the spell has faded. \n Now we can enter the cave using the entrance in the east"
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SCRIPT:07Intro_text_14
"Now we destroy their camp and throw their bones on the dusty ground"
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"Fast, run to the pass!"
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"Over them, brothers! \n The day, when a dwarf hides himself in his mine, full of fear, or creeps through the mountains like a thieve, will never come! \n  Let us build barracks and fight a battle about which even our descendents will sing!"
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"Dwarves! The hot fire of the dragons could not frighten us, \n we have fought and won against every enemy; Framsburg shall be our next aim! \n Death to the orcs!"
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SCRIPT:08ObjectiveText_01
"All heroes have to survive!"
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SCRIPT:08ObjectiveText_02
"Capture the signal fire of Framsburg!"
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SCRIPT:08ObjectiveText_03
"Protect the builders!"
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"Build a fortress, barracks and a blacksmith inside the inner walls of Framsburg!"
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"Destroy the enemy's supply camps!"
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"Capture the signal fire on the path to the pass of Gundabad!"
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"Kill all remaining enemies!"
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"Destroy the tower in Grabakr's camp!"
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"Build at least two fortresses!"
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"Nain: Dwarves! This is the destroyed fortress of Framsburg! \n Let us disperse the orcs away form there!"
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"Dain: There is a signal fire in Framsburg, that we have to take \n to give the signal to our builders to settle here. \n After that, we will attack the path to Gundabad!"
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SCRIPT:08Intro_text_03
"Nain: Our builders have arrived! We have to protect them, so let us send some troops to the ford immediately!"
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"The builders now are inside the walls of Framsburg. \n Now, let us build up the camp!"
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SCRIPT:08Intro_text_05
"Dain: Recruit troops to be protected against the attacks from Gundabad"
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SCRIPT:08Intro_text_06
"The enemy has supply camps in the southeast and southwest, we have to destroy them."
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"Dwarves, get yourself ready to capture the signal fire at the path to Gundabad!"
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"Hah! Now we are going to kill them all! \n Revenge for our dead king Thror! Aaargh!"
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"My lord! Another chief has arrived, his camp is in the north. \n He wants to negotiate! \n Seek him out, king Thror!"
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"Are you the king of those, that dig in the earth? \n I am Bölthorn, the chief of the biggest tribe in Dunland. \n We will make peace with you, if you will kill some bastards for us!"
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"King Thror! Grabakr asks for your help! He is attacked by Hreidmar's Dunlanders from the southwest! \n If he dies, no one will prevent his Dunlanders from attacking us again!"
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"King Thror!  They want to negotiate! Hreidmar's troops have been defeated! Let us call on him and make peace with him!"
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"Why take you earth-digging a hand in the affairs of the great Hreidmar? \n If you want to fight, destroy the camp of the dastard Gullweyg in the west,\n and the arms will be layed down."
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"Thror: The proposition does not please me! \n Let us hear, what Gullweyg has to propose us!"
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SCRIPT:08Intro_text_15
"My lord, the chief Gullweyg is ready for an interlocution, seek him out!"
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"Thror: Greetings, chief Gullweyg, I am king Thror from the Erebor! \n The savage Hreidmar wants to battle with you and wants us to help him \n but we desire to hold peace with the Dunlanders!"
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"Gulleweyg: This Hreidmar is an evil coeval! His soul is darkened by the avidity of gold and power!\n The only choice is to kill him and everyone of his tribe.  \n After that, we shall have peace."
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"Thor: We will not do anything like this! \n Shall they kill themselves. But whoever attacks us, will die!"
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SCRIPT:08Intro_text_19
"My lord, I am bringing bad news! \n Orcs have been spotted on the path to the pass of Rhotorn, \n they seem to be the vanguard of the great army of Gundabad. \n We have to resist and protect the camps of Grabakr and Bölthorn!"
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"Traitors! Gullweyg and Hreidmar have allied against us!"
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SCRIPT:08Intro_text_21
"Grabakr has been killed!"
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SCRIPT:08Intro_text_22
"Bölthorn has been killed by the enemy!"
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"Camera has been relocated"
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SCRIPT:MEOldForestRoad_MissionHint06
"ORK-OFFICER: The elves are hiding themselves in the trees! Kill them with the devastation-ability!"
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Mir war bewusst, dass es teilweise etwas frei war, aber so auf die Schnelle wollte mir keine passend Formulierung einfallen. Jedenfalls danke fürs Lesen. :)

Ar-Sakalthôr:
Kurze Frage:  Soll ich auch die Wörter Hofgardisten und Palantirwächer ins Englische übersetzten?

z.B: Palantirwächer = Palantirgurad

Ach und Stimmt mal der Anfang

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"Prerequisite: Arnor-barracks Pitch 2 \n In sword fighting versed elite-unit of the Kings \n Very effective in melee"
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Danke schon mal im Voraus :)

Edit: Wenns Oke ist darf ich dann alle Arnor teile übernehmen?

HerrscherSeuchenmarines:
Ich werd' "Nebelberge I" annehmen.

Thartom:
Mach erst einmal die I, wäre meine Meinung. Wenn andere was machen wollen, wärs blöd, wenn sich ein paar Leute alles reserviert haben.

Ich würde sagen, Eigennamen wie z.B. Palantir, Arvendui, etc. lässt du so und schreibst sie auch groß, wenn das Wort allerdings aus normalen Wörtern wie z.B. Hofgardist besteht, übersetzt du es. Was den Anfang betrifft:Du brauchst nicht Buchstabe für Buchstabe übersetzen, solange man nachvollziehen kann, welches Wort zu welchem übersetzten Wort passt. Wichtig ist auch, ein verständliches Englisch zu schreiben, sprich Satzstellung und bekannte Wörter.
So würde z.B. statt Pitch level (falls das dazu passt, außerdem sollte es klein geschrieben werden). Das "In ... versed" kannst du auch weglassen, hauptsache, der Spieler weiß: Das ist keine Bogenschützeneinheit. Das "King" kleinschreiben und außerdem geht es nur um einen König, also "s" am Ende weg. Zuletzt würde ich das "Stark gegen" wie Hüter machen, also "Strong vs other melee".

Das bringt mich zum nächsten Punkt: Wir brauchen einen einheitlichen Textstil. Wenn der erste "requires Arnor-barracks level 3", der zweite "prequisite Gondor-casern tier 3" und der dritte "to do this, you need this building at rank 3" schreibt, wirkt das etwas... zusammengewürfelt. Deshalb sollte man wirklich, wie schon am Anfang des Threads gefragt wurde, eine Art "Duden für Ingame-Bezeichnungen" machen. Notfalls übernehme ich das.

Ach, zudem würde ich gerne "Isengart I" machen.

Ar-Sakalthôr:
Danke für die Rückmeldung. Habe mir im Zweifelsfall wenn ich nicht wusste wie genau Übersetzen. den Google übersetzer zur Hilfe genommen.

Können wir uns auf das:"
--- Code: ---Prerequisite:.......-barracks level 3

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einigen?


Edit: Hier noch ein Vorschlag von HerrscherSeuchenmarines

--- Zitat ---Guten Abend,

Fuer deine Uebersetzung koennte man sagen:
--- Code: ---"Prerequisite: Arnor Barracks Level 2 \n Elite units of the King skilled in the use of the sword"
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mfG
HSM

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