Don't misunderstand my words, Thingol. I have no power or authority to determine whether one be useful or not as a member of the Edain Team. I just wanted to give you a more accurate insight, as I am a member of the internal forum: as far as I know, knowing the German language quite well is the main requirement for applying to join them (not to mention the modding skills needed). The kind of support you are referring to is similar to the voluntary duty of Beta Testers or Moderators as me; we certainly help the Edain Team too and we have access to more information, but we are not a part of it. There are also other supporters that gave their contribution in regards of other matters (graphics, tournaments and other initiatives). This is, so far, the extraordinary support that the English Community managed to provide to the developers, without the need of a new English arrival in their team.
I'm not at all questioning your skills in wording; I'm instead assuring you that the language-issue is always looked at with great care, and we have an English native speaker (and Beta Tester) gently volunteering to the cause. I thus don't deem it wise to embark on what seems more a stylistic overhaul rather than one involving the actual accuracy and effectiveness of the translation. In addition, I also doubt that a sophisticated touch will benefit the very game (for information must be understood clearly by players, focusing on being direct and not excessively complicated, even if you're moved by the best intentions).
Said that, you are more than free to send your work to me or others of the Edain staff, if you really desire to share your talent. By the way, no one denies you the possibility to express your interest in narrative activities in a proper way: I am the leader of the English RPG Team, that watches over the development of the newly established English RPG section of Modding Union. If you're willing to participate in the process, may I just invite you there (you can find the link in my forum signature). I'm sure the other members of my team will be very glad to see more people visiting that space, meant exactly to gather users with a profound interest in Tolkien-related writing