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Shagrat:
Ich probier mich mal noch an Angmar II

Der Dunkle König:
Ich habe Imladris I fertig:

--- Code: ---TOOLTIP:LackLevel3DunedainImladrisFireArrows
"Requires: Arms depot level 3"
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CONTROLBAR:SelectUpgradesImladrisStudienanbauten
"Library Imladris’"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipSelectUpgradesImladrisStudienanbauten
"Enhances the hall of the council with different extensions, in which the scholars of Imladris study blacksmithing, strategy and mystic of past ages."
END

CONTROLBAR:SelectRevivablesLichtbringerImladris
" lightbearer "
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipCommandSelectUpgradesImladrisCastleKeep
"Enhances the hall of the council with different studying establishments "
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CONTROLBAR:SpielsystemImladrisBibliothek
"Playing system: Library"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipImladrisLanzerSchildmauer_Neu
"Requires: Military studies level 2 \n The pikemen change their fighting style and use their shields to protect themselves \n They gain +70% armor for 30 seconds, but they are 30% slower than normally \n Left click to activate"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseTechnologyImladrisGoldspitzen_Neu
"Requires: Eregion forge level 2 \n Enables battalions to buy the golden point-upgrade \n Enhances the damage caused by arrows distinctly "
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipImladrisBibliothek
"Generates spell points in regular intervals \n Recrutes lightbearers \n Can be enhanced with different establishments for enhancing appreciations specific to this race \n You are only able to maintain one library at the same time"
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CONTROLBAR:SpielsystemImladris
"Playing system: Imladris"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseTechnologyImladrisHeilendesLicht
"Heal your allies with the holy light of the Valar \n Ability is activated, when the lightbearers are recruited and an arbitrary other ability is activated"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipBuildImladrisLichtaltarLevel2Upgrade
"Unlocks the lightbearers’ ability ‘Secret powers’ \n +10% recruitment-speed"
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CONTROLBAR:TooltipBuildImladrisLichtaltarLevel3Upgrade
" Unlocks the lightbearers’ ability ‘Lightflare’ and "Waves of hope" \n +25% recruitment-speed "
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseUpgradeImladrisHeilendesLicht
"Ability is activated, when an appreciation is bought \n Allies near to the lightbearers are healed by the holy light of the Valar"
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CONTROLBAR:PurchaseTechnologyImladrisHeilendesLicht
"Healing light \n Ability is activated by buying an arbitrary appreciation"
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UPGRADE:ImladrisHeilendesLicht
"Healing light"
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TOOLTIP:LackImladrisHeilendesLicht
"Healing light \n Ability is activated by buying an arbitrary upgrade"
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TOOLTIP:ImladrisHeilendesLicht
"Healing light"
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TOOLTIP:LackImladrisLichtfackel
"Enhance the Altar of light to level 3 for activating this ability"
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CONTROLBAR:PurchaseTechnologyImladrisLichtfackel
"Lightflare"
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CONTROLBAR:PurchaseTechnologyImladriswellenHoffnung
"Waves of hope"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseUpgradeImladrisfeuerderHöchsten
"The lightbearers obtain knowledge about the element of fire \n They are able to use the abilities ‘Heart of flames’ and ‘Fire of the highest’ now \n Their attacks bundle the power of fire for burning their enemies \n The lightbearers are only able to specialise on one element at the same time"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseUpgradeImladrisVorbotedesTelperion
"The lightbearers obtain knowledge about the element of earth \n They are able to use the abilities ‘Flourishing woods’ and ‘Shacking’ now \n Their attacks bundle the power of earth for turning the ground under their enemies feet on them and tearing down buildings  \n The lightbearers are only able to specialise on one element at the same time "
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseUpgradeImladrisWasserdesBruinen
"The lightbearers obtain knowledge about the element of water \n They are able to use the abilities ‘Healing spring water’ and ‘Ghost of the Loudwater’ now \n Their attacks bundle the power of water for slowing down enemies on their forward march and taking their leaderships away \n The lightbearers are only able to specialise on one element at the same time "
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseUpgradeImladrisHauchausValinor
" The lightbearers obtain knowledge about the element of air \n They are able to use the abilities ‘Waft from Valinor’ and ‘Wrath of the heavy gales’ now \n Their attacks bundle the power of water for blowing enemies away \n The lightbearers are only able to specialise on one element at the same time "
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseUpgradeImladriswellenHoffnung
"Enables specialising on the Waves of hope-ability \n This lets rain down glowing balls from the sky \n Ultimate ability \n The lightbearers are only able to specialise on one ability"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseTechnologyImladrisLichtfackel
"Enables lightbearers to specialise on the Lightflare-ability \n This burns enemies with the power of light \n The lightbearers are only able to specialise on one ability"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseTechnologyImladriswellenHoffnung
"Enables lightbearers to specialise on the Waves of hope-ability \n This lets rain down glowing light balls from the sky \n Ultimate ability \n The lightbearers are only able to specialise on one ability "
END

TOOLTIP:LackLevel3ImladrisLichtaltar
"Requires: Altar of light level 3"
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TOOLTIP:ImladrisLichtfackel
"Lightflare"
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TOOLTIP:LackImladrisGeheimeKräfte
"Upgrade the Altar of light to level 2 for activating this ability"
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CONTROLBAR:PurchaseTechnologyImladrisGeheimeKräfte
"Secret powers"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipPurchaseTechnologyImladrisGeheimeKräfte
"Enables lightbearers to specialise on the Waft from Valinor-ability \n This awakes hidden powers of allied units \n The lightbearers are only able to specialise on one ability"
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TOOLTIP:LackLevel2ImladrisLichtaltar
"Requires: Altar of light level 2"
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Upgrade:ImladrisLichtaltarLevel2
"Altar of light level 2"
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Upgrade:ImladrisLichtaltarLevel3
"Altar of light level 3"
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UPGRADE:ImladrisGeheimeKräfte
"Secret powers"
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UPGRADE:ImladrisWasserdesBruinen
"Water of Bruinen"
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TOOLTIP:ImladrisWasserdesBruinen
"Water of Bruinen"
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UPGRADE:ImladrisFeuerderHöchsten
"Fire of the highest"
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TOOLTIP:ImladrisFeuerderHöchsten
"Fire of the highest"
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UPGRADE:ImladrisHauchausValinor
"Waft from Valinor"
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TOOLTIP:ImladrisHauchausValinor
"Waft from Valinor"
END

UPGRADE:ImladrisLichtfackel
"Lightflare"
END

UPGRADE:ImladriswellenHoffnung
"Waves of hope"
END

TOOLTIP:ImladriswellenHoffnung
"Waves of hope"
END

CONTROLBAR:SummonImladrisVerbündete
"Allies from Imladris"
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CONTROLBAR:TooltipSummonImladrisVerbündete
"Summon one Battalion Swordsmen, Archers and Pikemen from Imladris to the battle field permanently \n Left click on icon then left click on target area"
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CONTROLBAR:LW_Unit_imladriswächterHorde
"Guardian battalion from Imladris"
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OBJECT:BruchtalCastleUpgradeFountain
"Mystic wells"
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OBJECT:BruchtalCastleUpgradeFountainDescription
"Heals surrounding allies"
END

CONTROLBAR:BruchtalCastleUpgradeFountain
"Mystic wells"
END

CONTROLBAR:ToolTipBruchtalCastleUpgradeFountain
"Heals surrounding allies "
END

CONTROLBAR:ToolTipBuildElvenAmrothReiter_Neu
"Requires: Rivendell stables level 2 \n Hero battalion \n Strong against everything \n The library of Rivendell can share its knowledge with the troops for increasing their skills \n You are only able to maintain three windrider-hordes at the same time"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipSpielsystemImladris_Neu3
"Because of their experience at fighting, which they have gained over many centuries, the units of Rivendell are only able to level up through a banner-bearer \n The hall of the council can be enhanced with different studying establishments, which provide different advantages for the race. \n Blacksmithing studies: From level 2 onward Imlasdris-melee troops are able to upgrade their forged blades to blades of Eregion, from level 3 onward Imladris-remote combat troops are able to upgrade their golden point arrows to golden point arrows of Eregion. \n Military studies: From level 2 onward Imladris-common units are able to change their, from level 3 onward elite units of Rivendell are able to change their formation. \n Mystic studies: From level 2 onward lightbearer are able to use their abilities, from level 3 onward combined lightbearer are able to use their abilities."
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipSpielsystemImladrisBibliothek_Neu
"The library is a central building of Rivendell, that can be enhanced with different studying establishments providing different advantages for the race. \n When an establishment has been built, it counts as an separate building, that can be interacted with \n Blacksmithing studies: From level 2 onward Imlasdris-melee troops are able to upgrade their forged blades to blades of Eregion, From level 3 onward Imladris-remote combat troops are able to upgrade their golden point arrows to golden point arrows of Eregion. \n Military studies: From level 2 onward Imladris-common units are able to change their, from level 3 onward elite units of Rivendell are able to change their formation. \n Mystic studies: From level 2 onward lightbearers are able to use their abilities, from level 3 onward combined lightbearers are able to use their abilities."
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CONTROLBAR:TooltipWaffenNoldor_Neu
"Arm the units of Rivendell with weapons of the Noldor \n +50% attack and fear-resistance for allied units \n Left click on icon then left click on wished units"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipCommandSelectRevivablesLichtbringerImladris
"Recruit the wise magic-casters of Rivendell, who can use the powers of the elements for protecting the House of Elrond"
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CONTROLBAR:ToolTipImladrisEregionForge
"Researches unit upgrades of Rivendell \n Generates resources"
END

TOOLTIP:LackBruchtalBasicTrainingTechnology
"Requires: Barracks level 3"
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Wobei ich mir nicht sicher war:
-Windreiter: Wind rider?
-Lichtbringer: Lightbringer?
-Stufe immer mit Level übersetzen? (Stage ginge auch)
-Fernkampf: Remote combat?
-Goldspitzenpfeile: Golden point arrows?
-Schmiede Eregions: Smithery of Eregion?

Außerdem steht im Deutschen gegen das Ende unter "ToolTipSpielsystemImladr is_Neu3" "Erfahrung Kampferfahrung", ein "Erfahrung" zu viel.

Ealendril der Dunkle:
- Windrider
- Lightbearer
- Immer Level
- Eregion Forge

Der Dunkle König:
Vielen dank, ich habe es korrigiert. Ich werde mir dann mal Imladris II vornehmen.

FG15:
Ein paar Anmerkungen noch von mir.
Für Fernkampf wird weitestgehend "ranged" benutzt, was ich auch dem Fall hier nehmen würde.

"Library Imladris’" klingt leider grauenhaft, da es solch eine Satzstruktur im Englischen nicht gibt. Benutzte da Library of Imladris oder noch besser Imladris Library. An ein paar anderen habe ich noch ähnliche Fehler bemerkt.

Hinter Requires kannst du den Doppelpunkt einfach weglassen.

Für das Waffenlager der Dunedain würde ich das Wort "Arsenal" verwenden, da das für mich besser klingt als Arms Depot.

Eigennamen wie Lightbearers kann man großschreiben, das war auch im Englischen Schlacht um Mittelerde so, dass eigentlich alles, was ein eigenes Objekt war, großgeschrieben wurde.

Für nahe Einheiten wird nearby allies/ units verwendet.

Für das Ausbilden von Einheiten wird Train verwendet.

Ansonsten sieht der Text wirklich gut aus.

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